EDITORIAL SERVICES
Thoughtful Feedback, stronger stories
Every story begins with a spark of possibility. My goal is to help you shape that spark into a manuscript that feels intentional, emotionally resonant, and true to your voice. Whether you're outlining your first novel, preparing to query, or revising a completed draft, I provide collaborative, developmental feedback designed to help you write with greater confidence and clarity.
I don't believe in rewriting your story for you. I believe in asking the right questions, identifying what's holding your manuscript back, and helping you discover the strongest version of the story you're trying to tell.
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Perfect for writers seeking big-picture feedback on a completed manuscript.
A developmental critique is designed to help you understand what's working, where readers may lose momentum, and how to strengthen your manuscript before querying or publication. My feedback focuses on the overall reading experience while respecting your unique voice and creative vision.
Your critique includes:
Comprehensive editorial letter
In-manuscript comments throughout
Feedback on:
Story structure
Character development
Pacing
Stakes and tension
Emotional resonance
Voice
Plot consistency
Overall reader experience
Investment
Pricing based on manuscript word count.Up to 60,000: $550
60,001–80,000: $700
80,001–100,000: $850
Over 100,000: Custom Quote
Not quite ready to commit?
If you'd like to get a feel for my editorial style first, consider an Opening Chapters Critique (more below). You'll receive developmental feedback on your opening pages, and, if you book a full developmental edit within 90 days of receiving your critique, I'll credit 100% of that fee toward your manuscript. -
Sometimes the hardest part of writing isn't putting words on the page — it's figuring out what comes next.
Whether you're developing a brand-new concept or trying to untangle a manuscript that isn't working, these collaborative sessions are designed to help you move forward with confidence.
Novel Blueprint
For writers with an exciting premise who need help building a compelling novel around it.
Together we'll develop:
Character arcs
Central conflict
Story structure
Stakes
Emotional journey
Genre expectations
Commercial positioning
90-minute consultation
Investment: $225
Mid-Manuscript Rescue
Perfect for writers who have lost momentum somewhere in the middle of their draft.
We'll identify what's causing the story to stall and create a strategy for moving forward.
60-minute consultation
Investment: $175
Story Search & Rescue
For manuscripts that just aren't clicking.
If you know something isn't working — but can't identify what — this session is designed to diagnose the underlying issues and develop a practical action plan.
Pre-session review of synopsis/outline/sample pages
90-minute consultation
Investment: $250
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Finished your manuscript but not sure what comes next?
Traditional publishing can feel overwhelming, especially if it's your first time querying. This strategy session is designed to help you understand the querying process, organize your next steps, and approach submissions with confidence. Whether you're wondering when your manuscript is ready, what materials you'll need, or how to navigate the road ahead, we'll create a personalized plan for moving forward.
Your session includes:
60-minute virtual strategy session
Overview of the traditional querying process
Discussion of submission materials and expectations
Personalized action plan based on your manuscript and publishing goals
Resources for researching agents and organizing submissions
Opportunity to ask questions about the querying journey
Investment: $150
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Perfect for writers preparing to query literary agents.
Your query package is your manuscript's first impression. Together, your query letter and opening pages should demonstrate compelling storytelling, a distinctive voice, and a reason to keep reading.
Includes
Detailed critique of your query letter
Editorial review of your first 10 pages
In-line comments
Actionable revision recommendations
Investment
$225
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Great for writers who want to strengthen their opening before committing to a full manuscript critique.
Your opening chapters have one job: convince readers — and agents — to turn the page. This critique focuses on whether your hook is compelling, your voice feels distinctive, your pacing keeps readers engaged, and your story creates enough momentum to carry them forward.
Includes
Review of your first three chapters or up to 10,000 words
In-line comments
Editorial summary
Recommendations for strengthening your opening
Investment
$275
Love working together? If you book a full developmental edit within 90 days of receiving your critique, 100% of your opening pages critique fee will be applied toward the cost of your developmental edit.
Interested in multiple services?
Bundle two or more editorial services and receive 10% off your total investment.
Add-on services